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“Perhaps we are truly ourselves w/ in bathroom stalls … ”

And then, an arrow which pointed to the above:

“These inscriptions are so much more frank & honest than those on Facebook’s walls.”

I refine these two lines a little and add (yes, I had to double back after class) my own crude free verse:

“Perhaps we are truly ourselves within the confines of the bathroom stalls;

Indeed these posts ring more frank and honest than those we write on Facebook walls.

How shrewdly do you two observe of our modern interactions – meaningless, one and all.”

J39M

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